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[The Quay] An inside look

Postby Fallon on November 23rd, 2014, 7:32 pm

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In honesty, Fallon was beginning to feel ill at the stench and happy probing at the corpse. It was perhaps then that she begun to hold some clearer respect for doctors and healers of all varieties. Cutting and injuring flesh was easy, but being able to suck away and put down a sense of impending dread of tending to hurts was another. Stitching it together, pulling upon it all in and allowing the mangled state to heal. Her eyes gave only a flicker to the hum of the foreign tongue, as she tried to clear her thoughts into something much more managed to bubble up and through.

There was only a blink however as the Konti washed her lands, pausing as she watched the faint practiced moment of thought and consideration, "Notes and pictures are always useful, help in studying what's there and how to lay it out. Analysis. Understanding. Builds a better image. And... helps memory." She pinched her brow, lips wetting as she tried to hold onto some element of clarity. Regardless she looked down to her twiddling fingers with thought, "So... that's a sign of strangulation then? That line?"

It was a useful regardless, a clue and pocket of information was something that could prove useful in further instances, more so if it was on the field investigation. She gave a pause to rub the knuckles, the cracking pop that came with the pressure of doing so - the other side was repeated after that. Fallon gave only a snort of amusement when she was dubbed a genius however.

"I'm not a genius," she begun in almost tired tones. She pinched her brow, her eyes flickering to the body and then away with thought, "Some may call me wise, but a genius... no. Observer, seeker of truths, information, knowledge... maybe. But a genius, that I am not." It was gradually that Fallon begun to push herself up from the bench. It was with a small sway that she sauntered over, a grasp of the white cloth at the feet of the corpse, her fingers wrapping round it as she tried to will away the sense of nausea that rested within her gut. She tried not to focus too much upon the blood staining present.

"Cause of death, strangulation. Suggests preservation of what's within before... tampering," She pursed her lips, eyes looking up to the Konti's with a frown and seeking some confirmation, "If you are done then I shall not push for more information. But, more is always welcome. Never the less, the tools were satisfactory for your work? I was not completely sure what you would need for your field...?" She shook the thought away, and moved on, slowly dragging the sheet up and over the corpse once more, until, at last it settled past the crown of her head. From there, Fallon stepped around looking and attempting to read the situation, "How does Sunberth treat you, should I dare ask? I imagine with your profession there is many available who require your assistance, no? It is a rather brutal city in comparison to others." She gave a nonchalant shrug, "I do hope that it can be look passed."

There was a smile, lips pulling back to reveal a slit of white before disappearing once more behind the neutral mask. Her finger gave a trace across the fabric, smoothing it out as she went, "So, what brings you to Sunberth? No mean to be rude, but it is not exactly safe for your kind here. Full of evils and villains of all shapes and sizes." Fallon inhaled then, teasing the words from her lips as she made a small offer to the other, "I would like to establish a deal with you, should you wish to take it." Clearing her throat she continued, "How would you like some security while residing here in Sunberth? I can offer you residence here within the Quay, easy access to the ocean should you desire it, and a place in which for you to operate your work out of? You would also have the additional body of myself and... associates. What say you? Does this deal appeal to you?" she extended a hand forward then to shake.
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[The Quay] An inside look

Postby S'Essy on February 24th, 2015, 5:01 pm

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She was keep washing her hands, poking a dead body was not the most hygienic action, she had to be sure that her hands were clean so she was obsessively was washing her hands. "You could never go too far with that could you?" she thought. She was interested more about the body but she wouldn't cut just for fun. Dealing with the dead was still not her specialty and she reminded herself, that body... she was someone.

S'Essy turned to the woman, who claimed in a tired tone that she was not genius. Her answer was lengthy and exact. The Konti raised her eyebrows and was looking at her strangely. Bitzer was a smart woman yes, but an odd one too. Not sure if because of Sunberth or she was just like that but not like it did matter. She didn't bother to argue. " Whatever you say darling..." She grabbed the towel."Still, you are smart, you observer of truths, information and... what was it? Oh yes, knowledge."

She repeated the diagnosis. Death because of not getting enough air. A long and terrifying death, a shiver went through S'Essy's spine. "I think, that little girl had a lot of problems already. Leave that body to rest, I would clumsily cut it more and more. She was still a person." She took a close look at the corpse one last time, gave out a big sigh and turned away from it completely. "And yes those equipment was amazing, I was searching for these."

The Healer just took one of the chairs to sit down finally, it was exciting, terrifying and tiring. "Well, I guess it treats like it treats others." She started her answer, and had a faint smile."Probably more dangerous given my race and my gender. I try to get used to it. " Which was hard and she didn't know how successful she would be. But she had to somehow survive. This city was nothing compared to others.

The more she looked at the other woman, the more familiar she looked someway. She couldn't tell why, but it was like they have met before. Those eyes. Maybe she was just imagining things. Bitzer's question broke these thoughts and made the Konti thing. Shall she tell the truth? She didn't know. "I'm here...erm.." She couldn't just hesitate at the middle of the sentence... but she did. ".. I'm here because of someone special to me." Then her eyes wide opened.

A deal with her. Security, easy access to the Ocean, and doing what she could safely. This was a great, tempting offer. Should she? She needed to be somewhere and get money. And maybe the was the best way. She extended her hand to her also."Yes, I accept these terms and thank you for the opportunity." She had to go back to her place and talk to her Lover about it. also prepare for next day to move in. "Thank you very much, I must go back to my place, if everything goes right, I'll be here tomorrow. Good day Bitzer." And with that she stood up and left the building with big hopes.
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[The Quay] An inside look

Postby Ayviss on February 25th, 2015, 1:23 pm

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Fallon
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Hypnotism 1
Intimidation 1
Investigation 1
Medicine 1
Organization 1
Reimancy 1
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Lores:
  • S'Essy: New in Sunberth
  • Gestures to assist a prompt
  • Investigation: Dissecting a body
  • Dead bodies are similar to Nuits
  • Fallon: Can't take the sight of a dissected body
  • Cause of death: Suffocation
  • Dark organs: Lack of oxygen
  • S'Essy: New resident at the Quay

I didn't give you much medicine due to the fact that Fallon didn't pay attention most of the time to what S'Essy was doing. If you feel I got something wrong, though, shoot me a PM.


 
SEssy
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Medicine 3
Observation 5
Socialization 2

Lores:
  • Sunberth: Intimidating
  • Location: the Quay
  • Blitzer Redwulf: Acquaintance
  • Medicine: Dissecting a body
  • Dissection: Opening the chest
  • Fat: Yellow and soft
  • Dissection: Cutting through the muscles
  • Anatomy: Human organs
  • Cause of death: Suffocation
  • Dark organs: lack of oxygen
  • S'Essy: New resident at the Quay

I couldn't find many skills to give you XP, but you have won a lot of lore. However, if you feel I got something wrong, though, shoot me a PM.


Comments: Great thread, guys! I confess I, like Fallon, felt a little disturbed. But it was informative, and certainly had a great amount of detail.

Please, remember to edit your grading request as "graded". And if you have any questions about your grade, or think I've missed something, don't hesitate to PM me.

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