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Postby Naiya on August 11th, 2015, 1:37 am

She ducked away from his hand instinctively, more like a flinch than anything else, but it didn't matter, in the next moment he pressed his low hand into her gut with ease. Had he been holding his blade, she'd be dead in moments. She shivered. That was a frightening way to consider fighting, seeking the quickest way to dispatch an opponent. The method that would prevent them from finding a chance to strike back. It was nothing like unarmed combat where it was easy enough to spare your opponent serious injury while still dispatching them from the fight.

She imagined an opponent, someone she wouldn't mind maiming, and one man came to mind rather more quickly than she would have thought. With her wicked witch in mind, she practiced what he told her, trying for the idea of false attacks, and sneaking in to catch a killing blow before they knew what had happened. Her practice target was suddenly an opponent she wouldn't mind gutting once or twice, and so she became more willing, imagining all the situations she had been in where she could have taken out her adversary with a flashing blade.

She practiced distractions and even imagined scenarios where she could feign injury only to spring up to attack. With a weapon so small, really she didn't intend to use it often, her bow being her preferred weapon, but once something got close enough to stab, it was good to know how. And where.

Gut, chin, neck, groin, Bayon had said, soft spots that would dispatch an enemy in moments. She practiced a bit more, aiming at and ripping through the weak spots in her target before the call for the nearing end of the class came. How long had they been fighting? She hardly felt tired, sure her arms were sore, and perhaps her legs too, a bit. She felt good though, like she had just started and was ready to keep fighting all day.

She wiped sweat from her brow as Bayon approached, waving Amunet to join them. He spun his blade in his hand in a trick that Naiya envied, then showed them a new grip, one reversed from the first, made for grappling and defense once the attacker was already too close to get a good stab on. She took a few swings, trying to imagine how the attack would feel without impaling herself on her own weapon.

Amunet was digging with the blade, the new hold like what she used to dig up herbs. Naiya bit back a giggle as she recalled the way the girl's face had fallen the first time she had laughed.

Naiya could see how that could be useful, her one attempt at digging with her blade had been messier. She tried altering her stance and her arm positioning to make the reverse grip something she could cut through a gut or a throat with as opposed to just something she stabbed down or towards herself with. That felt powerful, the outwards stabbing motion. She wondered if it would work as well in a real fight as it did in practice.

Eventually she began working with Amunet, putting their blades aside to practice the intimidation and motions provided by the new grip. They were in close corners, Naiya roaring and clawing at the woman while she, in turn, stabbed at spots that Naiya didn't think to protect. When they switched, Naiya tried to mirror some of the spots, inner thighs, behind the knee, under the arm, places she had been 'stabbed' by the healer, they were often unprotected, and once the other girl even caught her hard enough behind the knee to knock Naiya to the ground with a thud.

She seemed surprised, and Naiya was too, more at ending up in the dirt than at the person who had done it. Amunet was apologetic about the entire affair, bemoaning the necessity until after a number of long chimes of fighting she asked,

“Rak’keli teaches that we must be at our best and strong. This makes me stronger, right?”

Strong positive, agreement, encouragement, all the signs flitted though her hands in a dance far more beautiful than the dancing blades. "You can't heal others if you're dead." She agreed, getting closer to the girl before mock stabbing her in the gut.

"If you really want to be strong, you should practice everyday. Form some strong muscles, be ready for anything."
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Postby Tribal on August 14th, 2015, 1:08 am

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Trail smiled, remembering the countless lessons he had gone through before he finally started to feel comfortable with a bow and right up until this day there were still moments where he missed his target or didn’t perform as expert a shot as he might have liked. “Again,” Trail pointed, “Middle target, best of three. Gather your arrows and keep trying.”

He had placed Lian’s experience around about the first target, slowly graduating into the second, which he would hopefully be able to hit one in three times by the end of the lesson. “Remember to breathe, take your time that one isn’t going anywhere.”

Naiya Dawnwhisper & Amunet

Bayon was torn between using one of two emotions, amusement, or utter concern; were these girls listening to him at all? Naiya seemed to have come a long way in their time together while Amunet seemed content just to go with the flow. He watched the way they used the reverse grip, offering small hints and corrections where he saw fit before turning his back to watch the young men who were just as enthusiastic if not a little sweatier, “Good!” Bayon beamed, he had obviously seen something he liked the look of, “Keep going, no one told you to stop yet!”

A few chimes later and Bayon had returned to the girls to offer what more he could. “Do either of you have any questions? Why don’t you show me what you’ve learned today?”
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Postby Amunet on August 15th, 2015, 2:04 pm

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When they set upon each other to practice, the young woman was apprehensive at first. Her brothers always joked about her size and lack of muscle. They didn’t count on quickness, ingenuity and the wonderful tactic of leverage. That agile mind could come up with a number of out of the box things. It didn’t always win, but it did make her brothers take steps back. Against Naiya who also had an agile mind, it was different. Amunet couldn’t get under the legs or maneuver around. The other red head was just as quick as she was.

The quick jabs were not necessarily hard as Naiya’s and definitely not as hard as the boys but multiple quick jabs could be just as effective. That was Amunet’s theory. She attempted two to three quick jab combinations on the sensitive soft spots and the hidden spots on the body she knew to be vulnerable. The thudding contact was hard to ignore as she didn’t wish to give pain but had to. This was a have to not want to. The quick jab went down the back of the thigh and hit the back of the knee. Much to her surprise down went Naiya and the slight formed girl gasped. “oh my goodness, I am so sorry.”

No matter how many times Naiya would say the apologies was not necessary, the contrite girl still felt obligated to do so. The other red head reassured her that this was making both of them stronger and Naiya copied those jabs to those hidden spots that Amunet pointed at. The smaller girl learned more of the basics with Naiya’s help and Naiya learned surprising new moves. They helped each other understand the moves in a way a female body was composed. The center of gravity for a man versus a woman is distinctly different. A man’s center of gravity was more at the gut. A woman’s center of gravity was more centered between the hips. Naiya’s growls and clawing was definitely effective but Amunet didn’t claw or growl. The girl went very very quiet. It was deceptively mild. As Naiya would get close with a clawing swipe of her hand, the smaller girl would duck and dart behind. Her foot would be right behind her heel as she turned, lifted slightly up from her low crouch position and elbowed her at the small of the back, lay her forearm flat, mimicked a reverse dagger jab and pushed.

They laughed as Naiya wanted to try that. They both ended up laughing while they worked out the maneuvers so each could learn. Naiya was fantastic with raw power. Amunet envied that raw power even if she didn’t see it herself. The younger redhead would let her practice as much as she needed. When Bayon came up and wanted them to show him what they had learned. Show and tell time. Amunet would get into stance before Naiya and go stark quiet. They would circle till Naiya would strike. Amunet attempted to move out of the way to the left only to end up grazed and as the right hand went to the strike. Her advantage on the grass was that she was on her strider. Full frontal was not her usual method of dealing with conflict, yet here she was facing down a woman that was full of fury in the eyes. The girl was starting to feel her shoulder as they continued to circle. The arrow wound hadnt fully healed.
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Postby Lian Windrunner on August 16th, 2015, 5:02 pm

Lian eyed the middle target carefully. It was smaller than the first. And that made it harder to hit. But not impossible. He had proven that much when his arrow had glanced off of the rim when he had taken the shot before. Trail's smile was encouraging, and Lian nodded.

He jogged over to the first target, and worked his arrow loose carefully. Once he had done that, it only took him a few ticks to fetch the remaining two arrows and head back to the line he was supposed to shoot from. Lian put two of the three arrows back into his quiver. The third was put to his bow as he eyed the target once more.

Lian took his time. As Trail had said, this target wasn't going anywhere. It wasn't a deer or a rabbit that was going to vanish into the grass if he didn't shoot quickly. So Lian indulged in the luxury of time. He judged the distance between himself and the target carefully, making minor adjustments to his aim as he did so. He took a deep breath, and released it slowly. Then he released the arrow.

The bow string made a twanging sound as he took his shot. As before, the arrow hit the rim of the target, making a sound as it glanced off the metal rim and landed in the grass nearby. Lian frowned, but he didn't allow the failure to get to him. He had long since lost track of how many times he had missed his target over the years. Once more wasn't going to kill him. Still, it stung.

Lian drew another arrow from his quiver. He took aim carefully, using the length of his arrow to judge his aim. When he was ready, he took his shot. His arrow missed its mark completely this time, sailing over the target to land several feet beyond it. Lian muttered in frustration to himself, but he took several deep breaths to force himself to calm down. Anger and frustration had no place in hunting or in weapons practice. They would only make matters worse if allowed to run unchecked.

Once again, Lian took some time to study his target. What was he doing wrong? His stance was good...or, at least he thought it was. He felt well balanced while he was taking his shots. Lian readied his third arrow. His shots seemed to be drifting to the right. What was causing that? Was his aim really that bad? How could he compensate for it if it was? Wait...if his shots were drifting to the right, would aiming slightly to the left help?

Lian eyed the target thoughtfully. This time when he took aim, he aimed for a spot slightly to the left of the center of the target. Then he released his arrow. He seemed to have better luck this time. The arrow made a loud sound as it scraped the metal rim, but it did embed itself in the outer ring of the target. It was some progress, but not enough to satisfy Lian. He wanted to be able to hit the target every time at least, even if he couldn't hit the center of the target.

"What am I doing wrong?" he wondered out loud.
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Postby Tribal on August 19th, 2015, 11:08 pm

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Trail watched from the man's left side before slowly moving over to check the right; he seemed to have great aim and a well-practiced stance, but his arrows tended to land all over the place. Trail took his own bow and set an arrow to the taut string before pulling it back swiftly and releasing. The arrow whistled and struck the target two inches from the centre; a good shot, nothing to laugh at. He then took one of Lian's arrows and readied a shot, firing only once he was happy with his aim. When the string was released, the arrow sailed right of the target and went into the backboard they had up for safety. "Hmm," Trail hummed, "I think I see your problem."

After collecting the arrows, Trail set them down and offered Lian two of his own arrows which were painted black and decorated with white and grey feathers, "this is called a whistling arrow, it's not for stealth so I don't use them while I'm hunting, but they are great for target shooting because the arrow only whistles if you fire it correctly. I think your problem is just a mix of good and bad arrows, it looks like you have used a few of these one too many times, but it could also be the angle of your bow, try tilting it slightly to the right or left before you fire instead of holding it up dead straight."

It had been a while since Trail had done any teaching with bows so he was a little rusty himself, favouring bigger, heavier weapons like his father's Bec de Corbin. He watched Lian adjust and take another shot. Trail took an ink stick from the pocket of his black trousers and put a small, black mark on Lian's bow just above where the point of the arrow usually touched. "Tilt your bow until that black line is straight and see if it makes a difference for you."

He had done the same sort of thing for his son while the boy had been alive and it had worked back then. "Make that arrow whistle," the watchman encouraged with a daring smile.
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Postby Lian Windrunner on August 20th, 2015, 3:57 pm

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Lian watched intently as Trail shot an arrow of his own. He wanted to pick up as many tips on how to improve his own skills that he could, and watching someone who had more experience that he did was a good way to do that. The other man's arrow made a whistling sound that startled him. He had never heard an arrow make such a sound before. What kind of arrow would make that kind of a sound? And what advantages did using it bring? Lian knew that there must be some kind of considerable advantage. Otherwise, the arrow would be utterly useless in a hunt. Any animal you tried to shoot with one would hear it coming and dodge it with ease.


Trail's arrow flew true, hitting very close to the center of the target. It was a great shot, and Lian told the other man as much. His hand signs showed gratitude that he was willing to teach him. But when Trail took another shot, using one of Lian's arrows this time, the arrow missed the target completely. Lian frowned. Was the problem with his arrows, then? He had made some of them himself, and Lian couldn't remember if that particular one was one of the ones he had made or not. If that were the case, what could he have done to cause the problem? What could he do in the future to fix it?

When Trail offered Lian two of his own arrows, Lian took them, and studied them closely. The arrows themselves were black, and they had grey and white feathers. Were the feathers used what made the difference? If so, what kind of bird had they come from? Lian was about to ask when the other man spoke.

Lian listened to Trail's words carefully. The arrows he held were called whistling arrows, and they were used for training, not hunting. That made sense, since the sound they made when they were shot would startle the prey into flight, and make it nearly impossible to hit what he was shooting at. But as a practice tool that only whistled when you used it correctly, it was a very useful thing. When Trail said that he had used some of his arrows too many times, Lian glanced at the arrows in his quiver thoughtfully.

"How do you know if you've used an arrow too many times? Are there signs you can look for? For that matter, how many times is too many?" he asked.

Trail also suggested a few tips on the angle of his bow. Lian nodded, and committed the man's words to memory. Tilting the bow to the right or left of what he was aiming at might improve his aim. Lian wanted to try it out immediately. He eyed the target for a few ticks, judging the distance as he fitted one of the arrows Trail had loaned him to his bow. When he was ready, he took aim carefully. This time, he tilted his bow slightly to the right of the target. Then he let the arrow fly. It sailed through the air, whistling as it went. The arrow struck the target roughly halfway between the center, and the outer rim. There was clearly room for improvement, but it was the best he had managed so far. Lian grinned at his success.

Lian watched while Trail took out an ink stick, and made a small black mark on his bow just above the spot where the point of the arrow usually was. His next advice was to tilt the bow until the line was straight to see if it helped. Then he offered a daring smile, and told him to make the arrow whistle. Lian grinned in response. Oh, he was definitely going to make that arrow whistle.

Using what Trail had taught him, Lian readied another arrow. He tilted the bow slightly to the right as he had the last time, but this time, he made sure to tilt the bow enough that the black mark the other man had made was straight. Then he released the arrow. The difference was obvious. The arrow whistled as it flew, and embedded itself near the center ring of the target. It wasn't quite as good as the other man's shot had been, but it wasn't too far off. Lian grinned again, conveying both pride in his success, and thanks for Trail's advice. He was eager to see what other advice the man had for him, wanting to learn as much as he possibly could.

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Postby Naiya on August 21st, 2015, 1:58 am

The two girls practiced for a few more chimes, the unarmed aspect of the combat more familiar to Naiya, she fell readily into stances and blows that she normally practiced, keeping in mind that they were supposed to be pretending to handle a blade in their dominant hands.

Amunet reminded Naiya about using a person's center of gravity against them, and in turn, Naiya informed the girl of some of the basic things to remember when attacking, like not overextending oneself.

When Bayon returned and asked them to demonstrate, Amunet became quiet, falling into a crouch that looked restrictive to Naiya. They circled, and after a few ticks it became clear that Amunet would not strike first, Naiya struck out, attempting to grab hold of the younger girl.

Amunet ducked down lower, maneuvering herself behind Naiya, who pivoted to follow her. Amunet's foot was behind her, halting her partially, but allowing Naiya a clear view of the hunched girl. She had the advantage of being slightly behind Naiya, but her positioning wasn't ideal, and Naiya would show her that. She did so with an elbow to the girl's spine that continued down into a 'dagger' between the shoulder blades while Amunet elbowed her in the lower back and shoved her in a jab at the side.

Naiya stumbled away, a hard laugh escaping at the fun exchange of blows, perhaps they had both learned something from the lessons of the day. When she turned back to face Amunet, her face was a mask of angry determination, hoping to intimidate the girl.

They continued to circle, Naiya carefully keeping her stance, hips facing her opponent, chest up, not hunched, jabbing at the woman when she got close, and switching her hands to a reverse dagger grip. Amunet seemed to take a different method, getting small and quiet once more. The circle continued, and Naiya let it for a while, hoping to lull the other girl into getting distracted. At least a chime had passed, and Naiya was done waiting, she threw a punch with her right hand, swinging at the girl's face with fury. Regardless of whether or not landed the blow with any real strength, her next move was already planned. She lunged in the opposite direction of their circling, coming around toward Amunet, and dropped to her knees.

If luck favored her, she would be close enough to plant her palm on Amunet's foot, her 'dagger' hand would slam into Amunet's knee from the inside, forcing it out in a circle and sending the girl tumbling to the ground.

Successful or otherwise, Amunet seemed to be favoring her shoulder, so with a bit of sympathy for old wounds, Naiya turned to the girl, breaking out of their sparing by stepping widely back and spreading her arms in no harm. "Is your arm bothering you, Amunet? Perhaps we should call it a day?"

Bayon gave her a look that reminded her he had asked for an example of what they had learned. She pulled her dagger, already positioned in a forward grip, and nodded to him, ready to show what she had learned.

She lunged, stabbing out with her blade, jabbing it into an imaginary opponent before switching her grip and spinning with the blade facing out, clearing her back, to show how she had realize that grip could help one protect their back when facing multiple opponents. She used the reverse grip again, stabbing upwards at about chin height with a large ground covering lunge that placed her back relatively near to Bayon.

Anyone who could see her face would have caught the flash of a mischievous grin before she pivoted with a roar and an angry baring of teeth, the reverse grip on her dagger allowing her to stab the end of her dagger's grip as hard as she could into the man's chest, aiming directly for his heart.

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Postby Tribal on August 21st, 2015, 2:45 am

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Both girls had come a long way during the lesson and Bayon was impressed to see that they were able to busy themselves while his back was turned. He noticed Naiya go down after one of Amunet’s attacks only for Naiya to then return the favourite in a swipe that saw the girl with the sky-blue-eyes receive an unexpected blow.

When Bayon gave hint that he was still waiting on a demonstration from Naiya, she was quick to show him what she had learned with the forward and reverse grip he had taught her, daring to use the attack on him; one the man registered just in the nick of time for him to block the attack by taking the woman’s wrist and tossing her aside on instinct alone. He didn’t know if he had done any damage and looked very apologetic.

The tall Watchman helped Naiya to her feet and smiled, impressed with her attempt and glad he had been able to stop it. “A good student,” he admired her, flattening his fingers against the abused wrist, “I hope you didn’t sprain that on your way down, I like the determination on your part, but it isn’t wise to attack the teacher,” he scolded in jest.

Bayon rounded the group up and covered a few points with them all regarding what they had gone over today before sending them all on their way, suggesting Naiya see a doctor in the next day or two if her wrist gave her any trouble and that he would offer a gift to The River Flower on her behalf if such were to occur.

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Trail was a very attentive teacher, unlike his counterpart; he often liked to get involved to the point that both hands were dirty. Lian asked about the use of arrows and how one could tell whether or not they had been used too many times. “The feathers are a good starting point,” Trail explained, “as they help the arrow glide through the air smoothly, frayed feathers actually slow the arrow down and can send it off course. Another thing to look for is how straight the arrow is, and whether or not the tips have become dull. You can do this by finding a flat surface and placing the arrow down; if it looks bowed at all, it’s probably no good, though there is nothing stopping you from using them for a bit of target shooting.”

After Lian demonstrated his skill with the fresh arrows and the slight adjustments to his bow grip, Trail couldn’t help but smile; he liked seeing his students’ progress, “Bet you didn’t know you were such a good shot,” Trail teased, “With a bent arrow it’s all down to luck, but with something fresh, the skill of the bow wielder is never in question.”

Trail set down a few more arrows and gave Lian some free time to keep shooting, “Go ahead and fire a few more off, I need a drink of water; if you have any more questions I’ll be back in a few chimes.”

The man departed then to fetch himself a drink and stood chatting with his friend Bayon for a spell, the two of them seemingly talking about how their lessons had gone and what they could do to improve them. Though Trail looked busy, he never took his eyes off the target; watching how Lian performed the rest of his shots.
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Postby Tribal on August 21st, 2015, 3:40 am

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G R A D E S!

Naiya Dawnwhisper

Experience

  • Animal Husbandry: 1
  • Observation: 5
  • Weapon, Dagger: 6
  • Logic: 4
  • Wrestling: 3
  • Unarmed Combat: 3
  • Mathematics: 1
  • Investigation: 1
  • Socialisation: 4
  • Endurance: 4
  • Body Building: 2
  • Leadership: 1
  • Teaching: 2
  • Intimidation: 4
  • Acrobatics: 2
  • Stealth: 1

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  • Wilderness Survival: Wear white on hot days
  • Mathematics: Close range distances
  • Intimidation is key in close range combat
  • Wresting: The basics
  • Mayra: A helpful young woman
  • Teaching: Interpretation and language basics
  • Amunet: A familiar face
  • Bayon: A clueless man
  • Unarmed Combat: Knowing where to put your feet
  • Dagger: An extension of self
  • Dagger: Go for the groin, heart, and neck
  • Dagger: A stabbing weapon
  • Dagger: No good for slashing attacks
  • Stealth: Small weapons are perfect for stealth attacks
  • Dagger: Forwards grip
  • Dagger: Reverse grip
  • Amunet: A humorous young woman
  • Bayon: An honourable man
  • Amunet: A dirty fighter
  • Unarmed Combat: Watch your back



Amunet

Experience

  • Body Building: 1
  • Observation: 5
  • Medicine: 1
  • Logic: 3
  • Socialisation: 2
  • Weapon, Dagger: 3
  • Unarmed Combat: 2
  • Socialisation: 2
  • Endurance: 2
  • Meditation: 1
  • Philosophy: 1

Lore

  • Medicine: Drinking Water to avoid sunstroke
  • The Drykas are a brutal race of people
  • Wrestling: Brutality is necessary in some circumstances
  • Amunet: A kind soul
  • Dagger: The sharp end first
  • Bayon: An imposing figure
  • Meditation: Take a deep breath and try again
  • Amunet: A healer not a fighter
  • Dagger: Reverse grip
  • Amunet: Has faith in Rak’keli
  • Logic: Physical strength doesn't always win battles
  • Naiya Dawnwhisper: A strong-willed woman
  • Dagger: Mastering the basics

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Wow, nice work girls, that was a big one! I'll keep running this thread until Lian is done (though no longer than the end of the season sorry Lian when you will get your grades regardless). I think we all learned a lot, me especially about how these types of things work. Hopefully I’ll be a lot better next time!

Naiya: Great work, you made it really easy to write quick, interactive responses and I found that the story flowed really well. Hopefully Niaya made some new friends and connections and got exactly what she came for!

Amunet: Great first thread, lots of learning curbs! I want you to be very careful about the attacks Amunet lands in future. It’s important to take the attack far enough that the other person has time to respond, but not so far that you land the attack and decided what or how the other person reacts unless they give you permission before hand. Long form RP is hard to get used to, but once you master all of these little rules you will be amazing!
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Postby Lian Windrunner on August 22nd, 2015, 5:48 pm

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Lian listened closely to what Trail had to say in response to his questions. He had noticed that some of the feathers on his arrows were getting frayed, but he hadn't thought anything of it. A few other arrows looked a bit bowed. When he got a chance, he would have to sort through all of his arrows and set aside the ones that were damaged. They wouldn't be thrown out because as Trail said, they could be used for practice. But he wouldn't use them when he went hunting anymore.

Lian grinned at the compliment Trail gave him, then it was time to practice some more. When the other man went to get a drink of water, Lian fired off three more sets of the whistling arrows, retrieving the arrows after each set so he could shoot them again. Of the nine shots, every one hit the target. Three hit the dead center of the target, and four others hit close to the center. The remaining two hit the outer ring of the target, but even they were closer to the next ring than to the rim of the target. Lian grinned at his marked improvement as a rush of pride and accomplishment filled him.

"Where can I get some of these whistling arrows, and how much do they cost?" Lian asked when Trail returned.

"I could really use some to practice with. Also, do you have any tips on shooting birds once they've taken to the air? I usually hunt deer or rabbits. Once in a great while, I am lucky enough to catch a bird on the ground, and get off a shot before it takes to the sky. But I've never had any luck at all when trying to shoot something that is already in the air, or with a bird that is startled into flight as I take my shot."

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