Fall 518: Character Registry

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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

Fall 518: Character Registry

Postby Crylon Stonecraft on September 3rd, 2018, 10:57 pm


Character Name: Crylon Stonecraft
Type of Residence: Non-citizen Resident/Visitor
Profession: Last season was employed as an Architect for one of the wood companies, surveying and detailing building damage from the freeze the prior season.
Briefly Describe Your Character: An Isur exploring the wilds beyond the borders of the Kingdom, seeking to expand his knowledge and learning and some day return to Sultros with it. Currently focused on building styles and ways of the non-Isur.
Need Moderator’s Assistance: Not currently, besides further job related stuff.

What is a piece of Mizahar lore that you would like to write about or see used more often? Summoning/ worlds. I've always felt it was a very interesting but underdeveloped/underused bit of lore and skill. Very few medium threat worlds, most of the current ones tend either on the high or low end it seems, and not many pc's utilize the magic.

What is the skill you would most like to improve upon as a writer? Still working on improving my crafting/building skills as a writer, to better detail using them.

What is the thing you want to improve the most in regards to your PC? Currently focused on increasing building/crafting skills.

What do you look for in a thread partner? Someone active, and who I can mesh with in writing, rather than being in the same thread but not really meshing together into one cohesive story.

Would you be interested in constructive criticism on your writing? Sure. You can't fix something if you do not realize it could be improved/is broken.

You may ask one question of your ST. Of the various gods you have written as IC, which was your favorite to write as and why?
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Crylon Stonecraft
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Joined roleplay: June 2nd, 2018, 4:26 am
Location: Ravok
Race: Isur
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Fall 518: Character Registry

Postby Sevris on September 5th, 2018, 10:04 pm

Character Name: Sevris Lazarin
Type of Residence: Citizen
Profession: Soldier in Ebonstryfe
Briefly Describe Your Character: Sevris has been shamed but now has recovered from it. He has a darker personality because of it and seeks retribution and honor because of it.
Need Moderator’s Assistance: Nope

What is a piece of Mizahar lore that you would like to write about or see used more often? Was gonna say the Voice but this season you guys went above and beyond and brought her and Rhysol back.

What is the skill you would most like to improve upon as a writer? I believe feelings is something I'm not that good at.

What is the thing you want to improve the most in regards to your PC? A better resume with the Stryfe.

What do you look for in a thread partner? Someone who can keep the story moving.

Would you be interested in constructive criticism on your writing? I get it all the time here.

You may ask one question of your ST. I got nothing.
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Sevris
One of the Punished
 
Posts: 262
Words: 149212
Joined roleplay: July 24th, 2012, 5:26 pm
Race: Human
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Fall 518: Character Registry

Postby Elias Caldera on September 11th, 2018, 1:51 am

Character Name: Elias Caldera

Type of Residence: Citizen

Profession: Ebonstryfe Commander

Briefly Describe Your Character: Ambitious cretin. Malicious mage. Considerate lover.

Need Moderator’s Assistance: No

What is a piece of Mizahar lore that you would like to write about or see used more often? City culture

What is the skill you would most like to improve upon as a writer? Better grammar, sentence structure, yada yada yada

What is the thing you want to improve the most in regards to your PC? Personal plots
Mostly active on Sundays

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Harbinger
 
Posts: 781
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Joined roleplay: September 14th, 2013, 1:28 am
Location: Ravok
Race: Human
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Fall 518: Character Registry

Postby Hauk on October 12th, 2018, 4:36 am

Character Name: Hauk Tarn
Type of Residence: Visitor
Profession: Hunter
Briefly Describe Your Character: Hauk is a Hunter, generally preferring to spend his time outdoors to crowded cities.
Need Moderator’s Assistance: Not really

What is a piece of Mizahar lore that you would like to write about or see used more often? You may cite or link a Lore page but please tell us why.

What is the skill you would most like to improve upon as a writer? writing believable characters, not just Hauk, but NPC's that feel natural instead of feeling like NPC's

What is the thing you want to improve the most in regards to your PC? This season would be Skill development.

What do you look for in a thread partner? constancy as well as proactive.

Would you be interested in constructive criticism on your writing? Yes.

You may ask one question of your ST. N/A
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Posts: 12
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Joined roleplay: September 30th, 2018, 5:15 pm
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