[Note by Stardust] Coren

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Coren

Postby Coren on July 27th, 2011, 9:46 pm

Coren skyglow

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Basic Information

Race:Vantha
Birthday & Age: Born the 89th of winter 487, 24 years old.
Gender:Male

Physical Description
Even though Coren is marked by morwen and should be comfortable with only the minimum of fur clothes to keep him warm thanks to it, he still wraps himself in old and well worn, but still fairly decent, clothes, the only thing actually peeking out from underneath the heavy fur robe and clothes are his hands and his eyes, even his face is masked behind a strip of cloth and is rather paranoid about those things. Even around people he completely trusts.

If he stands upright he stands around 5 feet and 7 inches, though he mostly walks slightly hunched over. The result of a bad posture.

Coren's eyecolor changes with his emotion. just like every other vantha

Sad:brown
happy:dark green
angry: yellow
Curious: dark navy
Fury: graphite
Fear: a dull greyish brow
love:Cobalt
exitement: sea green
Worry: dark red


Personality
Coren is quite the intresting person, though others would just call him a wierdo that doesn't know how to act decent in a social situation. They would be wrong, coren knows quite well how to act to others most of the time and can read the mood in a room well enough to avoid the label 'socially awkward.' if he gives it some effort. The problem is, most of the time he doesn't care about those things the mayority of the time. Why waste time and effort on saying something in a roundabout manner, when you can say the same things in less then a minute in a clear and precise manner.

Aside from his dismissive attitude of unnessecary actions, he also tends to lean towards sligthly obsessive behavior when something catches his eye. Spending hours straight at his project, ignoring his own bodily needs for day's straight if he has got it bad.


character history


lore :
Avanthal:
A Day of Toil in the Mines
Corpses in the Iceglaze Mines

Contacts

Antar the Bounty Hunter and Mage
Contact: Vannis Skyglow
Contact: Lor’eno Iceglaze
Location: Icestone Mines
Contact: Nohad Iceglaze
Contact: Parrsni Snowsong
Contact: Sliver, Icewatch Kelvic

locations outside
Sliver Was Born in Sahova
Sahova, Island Dedicated to Magical Studies

The art of ditching work.
Alternative Ways to Lock a Door
Wanting to Get Away, Trying to Get Antar to Leave
But I Want to Practice! *Groans,*
Putting a Bird Back in its Place
First Day on the Job
Being Interrupted
Never Accepting Help
Learning to Ride a Horse
Ethaefal (Basic)
A Prank Gone Wrong
Lore:Biting one's tongue
Evading Questions
Defending One's Cause
Chasing a Vandal
Ray’ken Skyglow: Prone to Anger
Contact: Oluse
Being Approached for a Sale
Organizing Books by Subject
Uncharacteristic Sabretooth Behavior
Triggering a Trap
Agreeing to Hide Unexpected Events
Contact: Pauma Iceglaze
Using Caution to Approach Unknown Creatures
Not Standing for a Drunk’s Idiocy
Trying to Cover Up Hurt About Family Matters
Loosening Up with a Snowball Fight
Exchanging Friendly Verbal Jabs
Giving Up Your Coat to a Chilly Friend
Parents Conspiring to Marry You to Alea
Parents Witness You Perform Magic
Parents Rage at Your Magical Abilities
Not Allowed Back in Skyglow Hold
Unmasked by Alea
Abandoned by Parents
Submitting to Questioning at the Icewatch Barracks
Demonstrating Your Abilities to an Authority Figure
Getting Out of an Interrogation Without Consequences

how to act like a person (yes I can!)
Showing Concern for an Injured Acquaintance
Standing Up For Oneself Against Another’s Insults
Not Backing Down to Stupidity
Using Words Instead of Violence Against an Aggressor
Chasing a Thief
The Gratitude of the Icewatch

Combat:
Getting Ambushed
Fighting While Grappled
Using Your Enemies Weapons Against Him
Getting Sick After Killing a Man
Taking a Fist to the Face
Longsword: Fist Grip
Longsword: Neutral Stance
Longsword: Vertical Strike
Taking Your Opponent By Surprise

tracking
Noticing the Silence of an Environment
Closeness of Tracks Denotes an Animal’s Movements

travel:
Giving Advice on Travel
Hunting in Avanthal is Not Like it Used to Be

Writing:
Writing is not as easy as it looks

Teaching:
Teaching Shielding
Student of Eridanus (Longsword)
Teacher of Eridanus (Shielding)
Teaching Shielding Techniques (Spanning Shields)
Cautioning Others About the Danger of Magic
Helping Translate Nader Canoch
Explaining What Magic Can Do
Staying Calm with a First Time Teacher


Arcane:
the horror and allure of magic
Using Projected Limbs
Magic: Flux
Don't lie to an aurist
Sweet Whispers
Forcing a Projected Limb Back Into the Body
Focus Glyph: Increasing Concentration for Projection
Using Projection to Take Your Enemy by Surprise
Auristics is a Sense
The Grand Oath
Feeling Auristics
The Components of a Glyph
Working Through a Sigil that Splits Stored Djed
Being Unbothered by Unnatural Things
Using Projected Limbs as a Means of Exploring the Unknown
Mourning the Loss of Good Magic Work
Observing a Mage Suffer Social Backlash
Setting Up the Animation Process
Four Phases of Animation
Determining Directives for An Animated Chest
Using Yourself as a Soulcore Template
Dangers of Auristics Overgiving
First Attempt at Auristics
Learning a New Magic with a Partner
Watching for Signs of Overgiving
Magic is Worth the Sacrifices
Using Projection to Give Someone a Snowy Surprise
Investigating the Icestone Shard
Reconstructing a Set of Sigils
Deducing the Purpose of Another Mage’s Glyphs
Icestone Shard Trigger Glyph: Only Goes Off When Touched by Someone Other Than the Creator
Staring at an Aura for Too Long
Getting Information From the Aura of an Ink Vial



Combat

Skill Level Experience sp rbEarned
LongswordNovice 4 -- --****
Brawling Novice 7 -- -- *******


Social

Skill Level Experience sp rbEarned
storytellingNovice 2 -- --**
Interrogation Novice 11 -- --***********
Teaching Novice 12 -- --************
Intimidation Novice 9 -- -- *********
Subterfuge Novice 15 -- --***************
Negotiation Novice 5 -- --*****
Persuation Novice 7 -- --*******
Rethoric Novice 21 -- -- *********************
philosophy Novice 2 -- --**
storytelling Novice 1 ----*


mundane

Skill Level Experience sp rbEarned
Organization Novice 3 -- --***
Body building Novice 5 -- --*****
Running Novice 3 -- -- **
Riding Novice 3 -- -- ***
CalligraphyNovice 3 -- -- ***
Writing Novice 12 -- --************
Carving Novice 12 -- 10 --**
Acting Novice 1 -- -- *
Drawing Novice 6 -- -- ******
TrackingNovice3----***


Theivery

Skill Level Experience sp
InvestigationNovice 8----********
Stealth Novice 4 -- -- ****
Observation Competent 37 -- -- *************************************
Larceny Novice 2 -- --**


Arcane

Skill Level Experience sp rbEarned
auristicsnovice 5---- *****
AnimationNovice3----***
Projection expert 51 25-- **************************
Shielding Competent 30 15 --***************
Glyphing Competent 27 10 -- *****************
Meditation Novice 5 -- --*****


Gnosis

Gnosis Mark's
Morwen 1


languages
Vani: Fluent
Common:Basic
Nader-canoch:Basic

Equipment and Possessions
Heirloom: A wooden staff gifted to him on his 18th birthday, along the shaft of the staf there are a bunch of beautiful figures carved into it. Depicting important milestones in the history of the vantha
one bag of 'glitter' this dust creates the illusion of a bright flare (one use)
1 Set of Clothing
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel
Inventory: Book, Animation: A Comprehensive Guide
+ Inventory: Chunk of Icestone with carved runes

House: Lives in the skyglow hold
Ledger:
-3 sm maskA simple black leather face covering
-3 gm book, blankFor practicing glyphs
-20 gm Robe winterbaneI don't really need this much fur, but its comfy and handy to keep people from seeing me
-5 cm quillYou write with it, not much else
-2 gm inkNice black ink, expensive though.
-10 gm 5x scrollcase, leatherFor keeping those fragile scrolls safe.
-1gm 5 parchment scroll'sYou can never have enough place to write down your notes in.
+252 wages
-135 living expenses
-1 gm riding lessons
-5 gm food
+141 GM (job salary with seasonal expenses already deducted.)
-135
-75 gm
+6
+319 GM seasonal earnings
-135
+5[url=Chasing a Thief
Taking Your Opponent By Surprise
The Gratitude of the Icewatch]The plundered Apple[/url]
total: 301,65 gm
Last edited by Coren on August 25th, 2013, 8:12 pm, edited 86 times in total.
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"I'm speaking vani"
"I am speaking common"
"Me speaking nader canoch!"

Real life is kicking me in the can at the moment. posting is delayed. sorry for the inconvienience.
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Coren

Postby Coren on August 16th, 2011, 9:55 pm

Last edited by Coren on September 16th, 2012, 4:20 pm, edited 26 times in total.
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"I'm speaking vani"
"I am speaking common"
"Me speaking nader canoch!"

Real life is kicking me in the can at the moment. posting is delayed. sorry for the inconvienience.
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Coren

Postby Stardust on August 29th, 2013, 6:05 am

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Hey there! I'm Stardust an dI have been helping with grading threads in Avanthal. While doing this I found a few problems with your character sheet that will need to be resolved before I can continue grading.

  • Your character's age needs to be updated. He should be 25.
  • You aren't allowed to start with two basic languages. If one is learned, then please state so next to it.
  • Any deductions and additions to your ledger should have a note explaining what they are for.

Once everything is taken care of, let me know! :)
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