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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

Needs Must... (Rosela)

Postby Razkar on April 4th, 2013, 7:36 am

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”Maybe it’s not so much the losing part that they’re upset about, more the losing to a…”

Razkar's lips trembled briefly but he did not smirk. C'mon, he thought, spit it out. That B-word I know you're longing to say...

”…An outsider.”

And smart, too. Impressive.

He stood leaning in the doorway as she sewed, straightened and adjusted. Razkar had to admit, she was as skilled with a needle and scissors and he was a blade. Every movement was clean and precise, economical and sure. She knew what she was doing and, just as importantly, she had the reflexes and strength to accomplish it. He would have to bring Ayatah her, if they ever came through this city together. They would-

Would what? Walk the promenade and shop for fruit? Visit the galleries? The Area, perhaps? You will never and can never return here.

The Myrian shook his head briefly and chased away the thought, smiled faintly as he noticed her words coming out more easily now. Her tone was less hushed and hesitant. Her body language was looser, more... no, not trusting. Perhaps accepting? Part of him hoped that once they got talking, she would see he was not a monster from legend or myth.

At least not in a dress shop. He was raised better than that.

”Why, not too long ago, the Champion of Ivak was at the Winter Council Meeting, and this one Akalak was making the biggest fuss! Were you there? It was quite a show. But would he have been so upset if the poor man had been Akalak, one of his ‘brothers’?”

"I was there." Razkar grimaced briefly at the memory. Part tradition, part council meeting, part petching theater, and all that was resolved was that despite their chest-thumping and decrying, the Council would still grab their ankles for the Champion. Razkar shook his head. "Man should not have been allow to make peace so easy. Must atone."

Razkar's eyes darkened with a cold, terrible anger. He'd once heard a poet quip that there was nothing more terrifying than the fear of a righteous man. He liked to think he was that, and what this... Leo had accomplished was monstrous. Razkar cared not for the gods or their feuds, save for Myri, and that a mortal would actually interfere so stupidly, and... and...

The Djed Storm. All the pain unleashed. All the ravages to my home and my people, all because some petching barbarian couldn't leave well enough alone.

"... some things not get forgiven..."

She met his eyes after her imitation and he was back to the present... and had to blink at the brazen confidence in her own. He was so takn aback that he couldn't keep the smile from his face.

”Men.”

He did something in return that she would scarcely have thought a brute savage capable of: he made a joke. He made a face of mocking sadness and lowered his head like a naughty child, looking back up at her with big, round brown eyes.

"Ah, we but poor wretches." He said in a voice no-one could take seriously, and actually dared a snake-tongue-fast wink. "Why we need female. Clean us. Make us stand straight. You forgive?"

A snort answered him, and he chuckled. Then it was her own gaze that darkened as she processed his question.

”Well… yes. Only the lowest of men would not immediately marry a woman he’d made a child with. He must have been of very poor class. Trust me, if he’s not in the picture, your friend’s better off.”

He nodded slowly and a sadness crossed his face, but it was one with some peace and resolution behind it. As if he had been expecting that answer, and it explained much of what he had feared. He examined the belt she was working on and nodded a little faster, impressed with her work. He put it on and slid the double-bladed dagger inside it... then whistled.

"Is smooth. Very smooth."

He whipped it out again in a blur of flashing steel and dark skin, from small of his back to throat level in about as much time as it took Rosela to blink. An unmistakable pleasure flared in those obsidian eyes, and he nodded... but sighed. He went from a combat crouch to just standing normally, turning the dagger over and over, staring at it...

"Person I know?" He said, as if he was far away, looking at his own eyes in one of the shining blades. "She is part-Epyharian. Father was you people. Father left. Mother raise her. She gave me this. Is, ah... tradition? Of her clan. When she meet someone... close."

He was suddenly quiet, and she did not know what quite to say... well, she did, but she suspected now would be a bad moment to slide over the bill. Finally the savage sighed and replaced his weapon, smiling at the oh-so-smooth sound of sharpened metal on leather.

"Thank you for answer my question. I always think she better off. She is strong and much more... ah... in-tell-ee-gint than me. Must be barbarian brains." He said with a brief smile, then his hand went to his purse. "How much I owe, mistress?"
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Postby Rosela on April 17th, 2013, 12:36 am

As Rosela pushed the needle through the leather, requiring more strength than she really liked, Razkar seemed to be brushing away thoughts as he shook his head to himself. A part of her itched to know what he was thinking, but another part, the part that twisted in anxiety when he’d bared his pointed teeth, told her to leave it be.

She glanced up in surprise to hear that Razkar had been at the Council meeting. How had she managed to miss him? It may have been when she’d been distracted…

”Hey genius, watch the holes.” Her hands paused and her eyes flickered to the shadow under her desk. It was right, and she’d nearly put the next hole in the leather crooked. Correcting her path, she instantly wondered if Razkar was marked by Akajia, as she always thought when the shadows spoke with customers around. She doubted it though – either terribly few people spoke Makath, or, like her, they didn’t respond while with company.

She caught the briefest glimpse of fury in his face before her bold sarcasm popped out, and was relieved to see it drain away. Had Leo harmed him personally? Had the Djed Storm? Memory of the fury faded away at the sight of his puppy dog face, and she barked a single laugh, high and short like a rap on the door. ”Of course I forgive. You poor men would be up a creek if us women didn’t.” She had the strange compulsion to reach out and ruffle his…well, if not his hair, then at least that little hair dongle. She didn’t though, more out of a desire to limit physical contact than the more logical desire to keep the hand that made such a bold move.

He took the assessment of her race in stride, and she had the feeling she was only confirming what he’d already thought. Little else could be said on the subject, and by way of changing it, she sighed deeply as she knotted the thread and cut it, finally done with the belt. ”Done. Here, try it on.” He seemed genuinely impressed, though ruining the moment of pride when he whipped the knife in and out of the sheath, startling her, and a small “oh!” escaped. She laughed it off, putting a hand to her chest, and watched him move about, apparently testing the fit.

After a moment, the pleasure in his face had gone, and once again he returned to the subject of his friend’s father. Rosela found herself unable to comment. The woman’s scum father had left her mother, presumably Myrian, and now she and Razkar were…an item? How did one respond to such an admission? She had the unnerving vision of him formally escorting a faceless Eypharian woman through the jewelry markets of Ahnatep, and pushed it away. ”She sounds like a lovely woman.” Some feedback was needed here, but she simply didn’t know what else to say.

Luckily, he changed the subject for her. ”It’s 5 gold mizas, but…” She twisted the leather needle absently between two fingers. She was making a bold leap, but was counting on the continuing stream of more-than-curious Akalaks outside her display window to keep her curiosity from backfiring too violently. People had stopped coming in, and she bet it wouldn’t work if someone interrupted. ”If you’ll indulge a simple seamstress’s curiosity, I’ll take it down to 3.” She paused before continuing, dropping her chin into one hand and staring at him in simple openness. She was intensely curious, but attempted to prepare herself in case he refused to answer. ”The Djed Storm did something to your jungle, am I right? So it wasn’t home anymore? When you left…why didn’t she come with you?”
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Postby Razkar on April 17th, 2013, 6:49 pm

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”The Djed Storm did something to your jungle, am I right? So it wasn’t home anymore? When you left…why didn’t she come with you?”

Razkar felt his features harden at the barbarian female even mentioning what had befallen his people. Her tone did not help; it was almost salacious, gossiping, without any weight or remorse or substance. The Myrian inclined his head slightly, accentuating his black eyes that almost looked like they were studying her face for the right place to stick a knife-

Wait. Just... wait.

He breathed the anger out of his lungs in one long, shuddering movement. She did not know. She could know know. She is curious, and as he picked her brains, so she is picking his. She seemed like the kind of be carefree and blase with her emotions... but part of Razkar was warning him that seeming was something she was good at.

The Myrian scratched under his bare chin as he cocked his head to the side, studying her with a slow, appreciative smile. Three gold mizas surely was a bargain, but... he checked the sun outside... still only just past midday... oh, why not?

"I make counter offer." He said carefully, smile turning into something like a smirk as he counted out the three coins. "I give three... and I buy lunch at tavern round corner... with last two." He placed what would be their lunch bill (and an impressive one, for two gold mizas) next to the trio and folded his arms. "There, I tell you why she did not come with me."

A look he was familiar was morphed her face, coming complete with a quirked eyebrow and a hand on her hip. Before she could begin Razkar calmly held up a hand and shook his head.

"Oh, not make face, mistress. I leave city today," he said, but there was no more than a trace of sadness in his words, "and may not ever see again. Have some time. Would like to do one more fun thing..."

He waited for her answer as figures milled around outside and his own mind slapped him around the head, but Razkar soon beat the pushy bastard back down. It wasn't often he got to talk with one of Aya's people, and it had been a long, long time since he'd had a peaceful, pleasant luncheon.

Besides, he thought to himself, displaced fondness creeping into his eyes as he watched her and his hands adroitly fastened his new scabbard into place, she reminds you of her. That lust for answers. That quick mind and shrewd intelligence. Yes... this could be fun.

There was no guarantee that she would agree, though. Enough potential custom had been squandered by his presence and he honestly could not blame her for cutting her association with him short. But the fact he was leaving so soon, so immutably... it was liberating.

It showed on his face, too, when Razkar leaned forward a touch, eyes twinkling darkly.

"And we both know you are not simple nothing, Mistress..."

He wanted for her answer, ready to gauge her response. In truth Razkar was no better at reading lies or motives than anyone else he knew, but with the right push or jolt or catalyst, perhaps some truth could be revealed. Perhaps.

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Postby Rosela on May 1st, 2013, 12:20 am

He was at least considering her offer, and Rosela counted that as a mild success. She half expected him to spiral down into the angry barbarian she knew lurked a hair’s breadth under his skin, but he didn't. I was clearly simmering there, but he didn't move. He studied her face for a moment, and she wondered what he was looking for. It was difficult to tell if he was upset at the question, but she got the feeling he wasn’t staring at her for her beauty.

In one deep exhale, he seemed to consign himself to answering, and it was difficult to keep excitement out of her face. A first-hand account of what had happened to wherever he came from, and she’d bet no one in town had that scoop-

Whatever response she’d been expecting, a counter offer wasn’t among the options, and she blinked in surprise, her train of thought cut short. Out to lunch, specifically being seen out to lunch, with him? An eyebrow rose slowly and she wondered where such a deal would come from. Movement outside caught her eye, and she forced herself to ignore yet another gawking face at the window. She was technically already being seen with him, and a 2gm lunch was hard to pass up. How much could she pull out of him in a lunchtime?

“…Mistress…”

That word, the essence of it, sealed the deal, if the prospect of hearing the story hadn’t already. The natural respect of his speech, though ‘respect’ wasn’t quite the right word, it stroked against her vanity like a purring cat.

”Well, who could turn down an offer like that. Let me just close the shop for lunch.” Leaning back, she pulled from a shelf under the desk a small paper sign on a hook, ‘Out To Lunch’ emblazoned in large, red letters.

Got a thing for barbarians, do we?

There was a moment where she instinctively shot the shadow under the desk a look, but brushed it off as she turned back to Razkar with a smile. ”Shall we?” She extended a hand for him to go first and followed him up the center aisle. ”So where were you thinking, the Crys…the Blue Bull?” Her mind had immediately gone to the Crystal Rose at the idea of a 2gm meal, but even her amount of class may not make up for his distinct…lack of it. The Blue Bull had the potential to get a little rough, but at least she’d have plenty of backup if things went awry. ”I hear they have wonderful, ah, soup.” She’d heard no such thing, but she felt small talk was necessary for appearances as they moved outside. Hanging up her sign in front of the Open sign, she closed the door behind them and locked it.

When she turned, a beefy Akalak had stopped in his tracks across the street and was gaping at the pair of them. She saw him take a breath to speak, and she plastered a huge, forceful grin over her face, shouting out before he could. ”Sorry! Out to lunch! Be back in a bit!” One hand came up behind Razkar’s shoulder, but she caught herself before she touched him. ”Lead the way!” Anxiety was starting to kick in as more people stared, and not in a good way, but she did her best to force it away and think of what she was about to learn. Not even the shadows knew what his story was, and she'd be happy to lord it over that wretch living under her front desk when she got back.
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Postby Razkar on May 1st, 2013, 12:55 am

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”So where were you thinking, the Crys…the Blue Bull? I hear they have wonderful, ah, soup.”

Razkar quirked an eyebrow as her words stumbled over themselves a little too quickly. Crys... perhaps the start of... Crystal? Maybe it was a restaurant or cafe. He didn't know, but her suggestion of the Blue Bell made a sort of depressing sense to him.

Of course, take the barbarian to one of the worst dives in Riverfall. Makes perfect sense...

If the Myrian was insulted or hurt, however, he didn't show it. His tanned skin was as thick metaphorically as it was literally, and he didn't expect any better from a barbarian. But as they walked outside and she made her quick excuses to the hulking Akalak gawping at them like they'd just sprouted Zith wings.

”Lead the way!”

He noted also the faint movement behind him. Something raised... then hastily lowered. Like she was afraid to touch him or, worse, was afraid she might catch something.

But it was hidden. Behind her charm and her fake smile that never touched her pretty eyes. Was it too much to ask for some honesty from these barbarians?

Way of Mizahar, boy. Best harden up.

Jaw tightening, Razkar put his own fake smile on his face, probably with much less dexterity than she managed... and changed his mind. Long enough had he been playing the polite barbarian and while he would remain, well, polite, he had no desire to have a female in his company that alternately feared him and viewed him as some kind of... circus attraction.

"Ah..." he said with a frown, snapping his fingers "... sorry, mistress, not thinking good today. Have appointment in Smithy, must go there now. Not be able to take you to eat. But..."

Razkar warred with himself a moment and decided that, ultimately, he was still a Myrian. He respected talented females and she had indeed done him a service. He bowed low and placed a hand over his chest, respect and reverence oddly genuine despite his borderline-distaste for her.

"May gods show favor, and Fortune be kind."

The Myrian turned to walk away... and then stopped. The Epyharian frowned as his feet seemed to twitch, some discussion going on within his skin over what to do-

"Try not wearing mask, female." Such a different voice. Gone now the softness, little as it was, that had been there before, a veneer of civilization for the barbarians, gratefully shed in favor of honest words. "Not everyone is idiot, and you not as clever as might think. Find place you can be you... and goodbye."

In that puff of cryptic words the Myrian turned and walked away. He did not look back. He did not need to... but part of him hoped the barbarian had ears to hear him.
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Needs Must... (Rosela)

Postby Gossamer on June 17th, 2013, 4:43 am

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Character: Razkar
Experience: Logic +1, Shopping +1, Tact +1, Interrogation +1, Haggling +1
Lore: Riverfall: A city turned hostile, Being Refused Service At A Business, Overcoming language barriers, Knowing What You Want As A Shopper, Making Inappropriate Jokes, Knowing When To Stop Rambling, Identifying Weaknesses Of A Culture, Rosela: Intelligent Eypharian, Asking an Eypharian to lunch, Standing Women Up For A Date

Character: Rosela
Experience: Observation +1, Intelligence +2, Business/Retail +1, Sewing +1, Socialization +5,
Lore: Eavesdropping in the Market, Calmly assisting unusual customers, Making Alterations, Taking Risks With Savages, Getting Ditched On A Lunch Date

Additional Note: Raz I would have given you socialization, but you were maxed. Rosela, I gave you Intelligence for easedropping and then bribing Raz for answers about his jungle by cutting down his price. Otherwise, there wasn’t much on this thread. I’m sorry! It was interesting seeing the interaction though of two vastly different cultures.

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