[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Mealla Stormsong on September 25th, 2012, 11:09 am

I should've done this ages ago, but thought I'd finally put my character sheet up for review. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Kraken on September 25th, 2012, 2:35 pm

Mealla Stormsong - Your CS has been verified! It looks absolutely beautiful.
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Postby Nadia on October 3rd, 2012, 9:47 pm

I think my CS is ready for review now!

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post203014.html#p203014
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby BATTS on October 3rd, 2012, 10:21 pm

I think I got everything figured out http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post203348.html#p203348
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Kraken on October 4th, 2012, 2:48 am

Nadia - I sent you a PM that I would love for you to take a look at. Otherwise, verified!

BATTS - There's a small intervention on your CS. Please don't hesitate to contact me if you have any questions.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Ardal on October 4th, 2012, 3:33 am

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic26210.html

I hope everything is in order.
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Postby Torchlight on October 5th, 2012, 6:12 am

Hi Ardal! Your CS looks pretty great overall! I've left a small note about one thing that was missing.
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Razkar on October 8th, 2012, 4:09 am

Ready! So excited about this! *appalling sight of a 6'2 man trying really, really hard not to squee*

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Torchlight on October 8th, 2012, 4:52 am

Beautimus, Razkar! Great CS. A lot of thought and effort has been poured into this character and understanding Myrian culture. I'm so glad someone gave this race the attention you did.

There are a couple of small things that I felt weren't worth an intervention but still need to be addressed. I'll send you a PM. :)
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Postby Quiarinox on October 11th, 2012, 7:26 am

This is Quiarinox reporting my character sheet for a look over. I could probably use a second look that I did my math correct with my ledger and deductions (whenever I did them I continuously got different values and kind of gave up at the last one). Thanks guys!

PS- I am working on a gnosis request for my PC so when the time comes I'll edit that in, but until then... I didn't pretend like I already had one, lol.
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