[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 3.0

Postby Felavik Dysodamus on April 30th, 2013, 6:49 pm

Here is my CS. I hope it's good enough :s
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Postby Caesarion on April 30th, 2013, 7:31 pm

My CS. That green check mark calls to me.

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Postby Rhea on May 2nd, 2013, 8:37 am

Name: Rhea
Race: Mixed Blood (Dhani - Constrictor)
Birthday & Age: 18 years old, Season of Fall, Day 15
Location: Taldera, Falyndar
Gender: Female
Physical Description: Rhea is about six feet tall with a Stocky build. She has yellow snake eyes and a forked tongue that cause her speech to be slightly slurred and she has sensitive taste. Rhea’s eyes give her very short range temperature sensing (five feet), just enough to walk around in the night. Rhea has black here with a slight shimmer of blue in it.
Personality, Ethics, and Likes:
*Rationality: Stable
*Mannerism: Perceptive, Precise/exacting
*Self-Esteem: Modest
*Philosophy: Introverted, Pessimist
*Intellect: Active, Scheming
*Bravery: Calculating
*Morals: Normal
*Piety: Average
*Motivation: Energetic
*Interests: Dancing
*Loves: Gems
*Fears: Birds (Things from the sky)
*Hates: Myrians
*Manner: Courteous
*Mood: Even-tempered, Solitary/Secretive
*Honesty: Average
*Keeps: Typical possessions ,few quantity, functional quality
*Personal Habit: Organized
*State of Clothing: Clean
*Thrift: Covertous
Ethics:
Likes:
Dislikes: She hates Myrians for killing mother. She dislikes the cold.
Pre-Creation: Rhea was raised by mother alone. Her mother was a seer. Father left before Rhea was born. Rhea has no siblings. Rhea was raised to survive in the jungles and her mother taught her common so that someday Rhea could leave this land. Rhea didn’t care that much for her mother’s training as a seer. Rhea would rather work with her already strong body and trained enough to defend herself.
Rhea mother is a Vantha who had travel very much so south of her lands. Rhea didn’t inherit much of her mother’s traits besides her hair which has a slight bluish shimmer to as her mother’s did.

Rhea has always had an interest in gems and tried to learn whatever she could about them. She has never had the money to buy any really. Even as a young girl she remembers seeing them for sale in the cities. Her mother used to have a book about them and Rhea had memorized nearly every page of it.
Rhea does believe in her mother religion, but she isn’t advent follower. Sometimes she prays, but usually only when she is stressed. When life is going well, her thoughts don’t tend to drift ever to her religion. She does have her mother’s holy symbol. Usually when Rhea thinks about her mother, thoughts of her religion always happen. They both are tied together in her thoughts.
Rhea has been to both major cites of Myrains and Dhani as they both do allow foreigners. Mother well warned her not to stay anytime long in Zinrah. Appears being human or even mixed wasn’t good enough of a reason not to become dinner. Visiting in Toloba was great either. We are treated very cold there, but mother had some business dealing there. Rhea was too young to really understand what her mother’s business was. At the time, Rhea was a teenage and Rhea never visited either of those cities again. Even though Rhea isn’t full Dhani, She does have much of their blood and can’t be mistaken for a Human. Appears some Myrians felt her association with the Dhani was reason enough to have us killed.
Rhea lost her mother and her home. She returned from the jungle with some plants her mother requested to find the place was burn to the ground. There were Myrian tracks all about. Her only guess is someone took revenge upon her. Rhea doubts she could ever find out who did this. Myrains tend not care about dealing with foreigners.
Rhea has traveld to Myrian’s city for work and a vague hope to find those responsible. She felt that she had better chances to survive there then in the wilds. She found a tavern there that she could dance at for coins. The tavern caters mostly to foreigners.
Post Creation:
Initial Skills:
*Acrobatics: 10
*Climbing: 5
*Stealth 5
*Dancing: 5
*Unarmed Combat: 5
*Flux: 5
*Auristics: 5
*Observation: 10
*Wilderness Survival: 10
Earned Skill/Points:
*nothing yet
Equipment/Possessions:
*Clothing – White cotton.
*Waterskin
*Backpack
*Set (comb, brush, razor, eta)
*Eating Knife
*Flint and Steel
*Gold Holy Symbol
*Sap Pommel Dagger
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Postby Zenara on May 2nd, 2013, 8:51 am

Here is my CS!
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Postby Alabast on May 3rd, 2013, 2:05 am

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Postby Sasha Rysk on May 3rd, 2013, 9:12 pm

Please review my character sheet. Thank you :) As well, can you answer my question on how to add pictures to the character sheet? Thanks again and I am looking forward to roleplaying on here!

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Postby Ssynareis on May 3rd, 2013, 10:29 pm

I suppose I should post this here.
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Postby Carmara on May 4th, 2013, 12:19 am

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Postby Theta on May 4th, 2013, 1:21 am

This is my CS, if it seems to be typed childishly, please tell me so I can edit anything that doesn't make sense or needs to be explained. Thank you so much for your time! I really appreciate it!
" Art should be made from the Heart. "
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Postby Oleander on May 4th, 2013, 11:21 am

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