Dear Caelum,
I love this idea of deepening and evolving the race into itself more fully. I think it's wonderful.
I'd enjoy seeing something done along the lines of the Konti or Jamoura. Two other races, both heavily influenced by the Goddesses of Mizahar. Whose gifts and outlooks are greatly related to their creators. I don't know how powerfully felt it is to be a Forsaken when their relationship to their Patron isn't as fully developed as it could be.
Yeah the Tanroan touch thing never made much sense to me. Especially since She isn't their patron Diety and Syna's and Leth's appointments by Her would have happened quiet a bit before Mizahar formed or had life. It really just feels like a slight leaking of OOC knowledge -knowing in antiquity the relationship between Tanroa, Leth and Syna- and connecting it with a race born ages later.
I think it would be fun to see something akin to a Knoti gift for Ethaefals, a blessing of sorts from their patron Deity. Though I guess that brings up the questions raised by Eleret; just what is the relationship between the souls and their patron? Are they priests or etc... Personally I like the idea of a mystic-like blessing or gift of the souls from Ukalas. It enhances their mystery or otherworldly-ness. And like the Knoti, the gifts don't always have to be a boon, and could be more seen as a double-edge sword. Depending on how you'd like to stress their place (or lack of a place) in the world. Maybe each Ethaefal is marked by their Patron or something. I just always though it weird a mortal race touched and blessed by their Patron and yet a race from the Ukalas sort of forgotten of by their Parton.
I hesitate to speak to the shifting of the Ethaefal along with the season because I think it's lovely, romantic and it makes sense in holistically. Everything is connected and these celestial creatures mirror the earthly changing of perspective to the firmament that mortals experience (it seems like the stars move but it's really us that move). But it feels so … terrestrially tied and not celestially influenced. I think maybe there is room to broaden or re-focus this almost core theme of cyclical change that is a defining facet of the race. I think it also raises questions of Ethaefals on other worlds, something not addressed in the race write-up currently. Not all worlds experience the same seasons at the same time.
And lastly I would love to see the Celestial Language fleshed out in some manner. Who knows maybe that could be their gift. A Celestial Language that all mortals can understand or an understanding of all languages spoken. We know the Gods speak to mortals but like do they do so in that creature's native language or with something a little more mysterious. Just a thought, abet a fun one I feel.
Thanks for listening to me ramble.
~Jash