The Drove, Part 1 (Garland & Marrick)

Driving livestock from the Mithryn Outpost to market in Syliras.

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The Drove, Part 1 (Garland & Marrick)

Postby Katelyn Marks on January 14th, 2015, 3:31 pm

Everything was chaos, and Katelyn found herself fearing for her life as arrows flew, men shouted, and animals screamed in fright. Her father's gelding spooked beneath her as a Knight galloped by with his shield and sword at the ready, and she fought for control as he reared and bucked beneath her. She clutched at his mane and tugged at the reins, trying to pull him around and calm him. He lurched beneath her and she looked around wildly, trying to find a familiar face.

Before the gelding whipped around in another wild circle she saw an arrow arc from the trees and smash into Marrick. The scream that bubbled up from her clenched stomach died in her throat as the horse beneath her gave one final heave and threw her over his head and onto the ground.

Hooves thundered past her and Katelyn flinched in fright, curling into a ball and covering her head as the world spun and blurred. The sound of bleating animals filled her ears and took over her senses, their fear overwhelming her and choking her. Tears filled her ears and she clenched them shut as she lay there protecting herself from the cattle being driven by. She wasn't sure how long she was prone on the ground before a set of firm hands grabbed her and yanked her to her feet.

Kat felt unsteady, and her legs buckled when they were beneath her again.

"On your feet, girl!" a gruff voice barked, and the hands shook her.

She opened her eyes in fright and looked around, dazed and sore. An old face looked down at her, weathered and worried. It was the old man from the wagon. He helped her get her feet beneath her one more time and this time they stood firm. He held her out at arm's length and gave her a once over.

"Alright?" he asked, and she nodded slowly.

He'd pulled her to the side of the road away from the herd, and she looked around. Her horse stood tied to his wagon that was currently abandoned. She glared at the animal, but the old man shook his head.

"Can't expect a stock horse to perform in battle, lass."

The words cut her anger like a hot knife through butter, and she felt herself deflate. He was right. The old man helped her back to the wagon and to her father's horse, and held the reins after untying the beast while she made the effort to climb back into the saddle. Her hip protested and her head was pounding, but she couldn't just stand around. Kat definitely couldn't just ride in that wagon either. They other drovers needed help.

He handed her the reins and they exchanged quick smiles before he stepped back into his driver's seat and she rode back to the others at a quick trot. She was quickly put back to work rounding up a few more strays while the Squires and Knights handled the bandits, and it didn't give her any time to search for Marrick. Fresh tears burned her throat and stung her eyes, and as she chased a young bull down they tumbled down her cheeks and blurred her vision. The horse could handle most of it on his own without needing more than a general direction, so she let him and just hung on.

By the time the animals were back under control the battle seemed to be pretty much over--the Order victorious. Katelyn wiped away her tears and sat light dead weight in the saddle, letting her gelding following the back of the herd at a placid trot. The last of them were now crossing the bridge and fording the river, so Kat reined her horse to a stop so she could try to compose herself. It wouldn't do to have anyone see her this way. But that plan went out the window when she saw Garland riding up.

As arrow stuck out of his arm and he looked pale. Her eyes grew round with fright at the sight of him, and she reached out to him.

"Gods, come here. Of course, let me help you," she blurted quickly, and urged her horse a little closer to his stallion.

Her stomach churned at the sight of the red blood dripping from the wound, and hesitated when her fingers moved to grasp the arrow. A shudder ran through her and she closed her eyes when she felt the smooth wood and the bristly fletching. Katelyn gripped it tightly and gave a rough yank. It was sure to be painful--even more so because she'd never done such a thing. She felt it wiggle against his flesh and heard the wet sucking sound of blood. Bile rose in her throat as the projectile came free, and she instantly dropped it in disgust.

Her face was twisted in distaste when she finally opened her eyes again, and she made it a point not to look at her work.

"I'm sorry," she apologized miserably, knowing she'd caused him more pain.

She looked beyond him then, back to the bridge. They were rounding up a few criminals on the other side of the river, and someone else was riding across the bridge. Her brows furrowed and she twisted her horse around to get a better look. Kat's eyes swelled and fresh tears welled up. Marrick was riding hunched in the saddle, even paler than usual. The dark haired Squire had been injured during the fight--she'd seen him shot before she was thrown from the saddle. As he approached the glint of red blood shone on his face in the sunlight, and her stomach clenched.

Katelyn kicked her horse into a gallop without warning, steering him toward her friend and his massive mare.

"Marrick!" she yelled above the thunder of hooves, drawing his attention to her.

Her painted gelding clattered up the road to him and she drew him in hard. He skidded and stumbled out of his fast approach and stopped so suddenly that his rear nearly drug the ground. Both of them were breathing heavily--him from exertion and her from frightened worry.

"Are you alright?" she half-growled with the embarrassing effort with which she fought the tears in her eyes.

Katelyn knew it was a stupid question, but it was an instinctive one.
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The Drove, Part 1 (Garland & Marrick)

Postby Garland on January 14th, 2015, 5:22 pm

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The pain was unbearable, he had been slashed before, and stabbed in the hand and arms, but an arrow was much more painful than just a knife or a sword.

Knives and swords were quick and if you're lucky, painless. Arrows on the other hand, once they impale themselves into a person, pulling it out is hard, pushing it out is equally hard.

He held his voice in, gritting his teeth as Kat helped pull out the bodkin arrow embedded inside his arm. He covered his mouth, screaming wouldn't help anyone right now, it might even make things worse. People are on edge, and someone screaming could send the animals out of control again.

"T-Thanks Kat..." He muttered and covered the wound with his hand, trying to stop the bleeding. "I'm gonna head off to the field and see if anyone else needs help, and see how many casualties we suffered... Gods... I better get this patched up first though..." He said and saw Marrick coming back from the battle, it seemed he was injured too, and he looked even worse than Garland, and that was saying something.

Garland followed Katelyn towards Marrick. "Lucky us... We're not dead... We should get you patched up Marrick. Are you feeling light-headed? We should get some alcohol on these wounds before they get infected. Ugh... This really petching hurts right now." He sighed and applied more pressure on his arm.
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The Drove, Part 1

Postby Marrick Corvis on February 2nd, 2015, 8:51 pm

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Like a fair wind that cooled ones back when they were hard at work, he found his friends. His whole body ached like an old bruise, and his wound had already begun to stem its flow of blood. Yet, any hard jostling in the saddle was a means of re-opening it. Marrick rode stiffly, and bowed to try and keep that from happening. It made him feel as though he’d never rode a horse before as he bounced awkwardly with every clomp of Kiter’s massive hooves. To add to the pile of growing agony of his back, hips, and arm the adrenaline was waning to the point where the Kelvic was beginning to tumble into the pit of depression and uncertainty that followed a battle.

He felt as though his insides were on fire, and the faces of the men he’d killed haunted his mind’s eye. Not just the ones he’d killed in the last bell. They were all there. Their faces stuck in looks of surprise, fear, or malevolence. His stomach did little knots, and he stifled a wretch, before he shakily took a sip from his water skin with his good arm. The cold water was a soothing balm to his insides.

When he heard someone call his name he blinked through the mud and blood on his face to recognize Katelyn as she rode up on her gelding. Garland close at her heels. They slowed a little too quickly at the threshold of the bridge and he gave Kiter’s reins a gentle tug but spoke no words. He managed a friendly pat of her broad shoulder before he turned his attentions back to his comrades.

He was about to respond to her question of concern, when Garland spoke up as well. He felt like he’d been trampled by a party of Pycons, but he wasn’t dying. His whole body ached, and the adrenaline was gone. Yet he could feel his heart beat, fast and steady. Their overwhelming voices of concern though made him second guess. His wiped a hand over his face and found it covered in blood and he had forgotten how he had cleaved a man’s head.

With a grunt of painful effort he straightened in the saddle. The stabbing agony that reminded him he had been unhorsed, forced him back into the relatively bent curl he had adopted before and his body shook against its torture. Tears rolled down Katelyns cheeks, like little tender blessings. He felt his heart soften, and he could forget for a moment that he had been injured.

“Oi’ll live. Oi wounded meh proide worse than anythin else.” His words did little to dispel their concern, and he knew he was doing a poor job of lying. He combat shook his usual calm and collected manner, and replaced it with something more primal. His survival instincts were strong, and there wasn’t enough hard won education that prevented him from feeling as if he should flee, even now that the battle was over.

He looked away with a twinge of embarrassment. “Oi was unharsed.” He admitted with some effort as he drew a ragged breath and shook with its pain. “Oi didn’t land on moy feet. Oi was indeed lucky. Koiter fought teh keep the brigands off me long enough fer me teh get teh moy feet and end their miserable loives.” He attempted to stretch out again and was greeting with a couple of stiff sounding pops in his back. Whatever it was had him feeling a little more in control of his flexibility and he straightened carefully. “That’s a wee bit better. We aut teh spend a few hours at soothing waters once we reach Syliras regardless. They have a healer of Rak’keli that works there and nothin sounds better than hot bath after so much blood and filth.” He looked over his shoulder at the bodies of dead animals, a knight and his squire who’d been loaded onto a cart. He heaved a pained sigh and clenched his jaw.

“These ones that attacked us were truly desperate for food. Folk that try livin outside the safety of the city struggle and grow desperate. It was a hard cost teh pay.” His voice trailed off as his mind contemplated all the angles. Who were they, where did they come from? There were too many to simply be desperate travelers passing through who had been denied access to the city. They had looked starved and bedraggled, and the Kelvic worried that this ambush was a symptom of a much larger problem.

With a puzzled look of frustration he turned back to his companions with eyes closed to the aches in his body. A long sigh escaped his lips and he slumped again with a coupled of pained jerks. “We should get movin again. We need teh get the remaining loivestock teh syliras n’ repart this teh Stormhold.” When he opened his eyes again they burned with a fierce determination, yet his brow furrowed with compassion as his eyes beheld the fallen. "We'll make a foire, set camp, n' gather the dead. Katelyn, talk teh the drovers. Garland, you n' Oi need teh gather what forces a' the order remains and form a perimeter, prepare patrols. We're goin teh have teh set down here fer the noight."

it wasn't the best plan he could have come up with, but with the knights chasing down the remaining bandits someone needed to take over command of the remaining squires. Marrick never felt he was the most qualified, but action needed to be taken.

As the trio separated, Marrick nodded to garland as they rode out. "This is goin teh be a long noight."
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The Drove, Part 1 (Garland & Marrick)

Postby Sayana on February 16th, 2015, 5:53 pm

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Katelyn

Skills:
Skill EXP
Horseback Riding +5
Planning +1
Land Navigation +1
Observation +5
Socialization +5
Animal Husbandry +3
Horsemanship +2
Endurance +1
Medicine +1


Lores:
  • Riding: Trot, canter, lope, gallop and stopping
  • Participating in a drove
  • Garland: Squire
  • Herding panicked livestock
  • Riding: Thrown from a horse
  • Chaos of battle
  • Medicine: Pulling out an arrow

Comments :
Great job. This was a really interesting read with a lot of different dynamics going on. I also liked how you let Garland and Marrick post back and forth during the battle scene giving it an uninterrupted flow instead of trying to slot Katelyn in. Though I did notice a double post, so I simply didn’t factor it in.


Garland

Skills:
Skill EXP
Riding: Horse +5
Planning +1
Rhetoric +3
Observation +5
Animal Husbandry +1
Horsemanship +1
Socialization +1
Weapon: Shield +2
Weapon: Bastard Sword +2
Endurance +4
Acrobatics +1


Lores:
  • Marrick: Squire who led the bucket brigade at the fire of White Swan Inn
  • Katelyn: Drover
  • Intimidating a goat to stay with the herd
  • Defending a drove against an ambush
  • Shield: Ram at opponent
  • Acrobatics: Roll to dodge

Shield Points:
Shield Points Earned Reason
+8 Helping a citizen (risking life)

Total: +8 Shield Points

Injuries :
Arrow wound in arm - 12 days to heal if treated. 1 day to be fully functional with the help of a healer.


Comments :
Great thread. It had a nice variety of riding, herding, and fighting in it. You’re getting close to your required riding skill =)


Marrick

Skills:
Skill EXP
Riding: Horse +5
Animal Husbandry +2
Observation +5
Flirting +2
Socialization +4
Rhetoric +2
Detection +1
Tactics +3
Horsemanship +2
Endurance +4
Leadership +2
Medicine +1
Weapon: Longsword +2
Unarmed Combat +1
Meditation +1
Planning +1


Lores:
  • Garland: Squire who fought at the main gates
  • Prodding livestock to stay with the herd
  • Defending a drove against an ambush
  • Horsemanship: Calming an antsy Tiadem
  • Medicine: Pulling an arrow out
  • Tactics: Scatter archers

Shield Points:
Shield Points Earned Reason
+8 Helping a citizen (risking life)

Total: +8 Shield Points

Injuries :
Arrow wound in shoulder - 15 days to heal if treated. 1 day to be fully functional with the help of a healer.


Comments :
You never cease to amaze me with the detail of your posts. Great job. As such, there were lots of skills to award you. Just don’t forget you’re still a novice when it comes to fighting with a sword.


Don't forget to edit/delete your grade request in the grade request thread.

If you have any questions or concerns about your grade please feel free to send me a message.

Enjoy.
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