ELEPHANTS IN THE ROOM!
by Ines
by Ines
I got this in plenty of time, but truthfully the month change did me in and I missed the fact that July slid into August. Crylon wrote a lovely review and picked a nice featured thread for us! Forgive me for being late posting it!
Congrats Ines! Your writing is always stellar!
Goss
Crylon Stonecraft wrote:
For featured thread I have picked Elephants in the Room
At first glance it is just a simple job thread, but reading it I found a good deal of depth. The main npc is not just someone of skill, but backstory and reasoning directly mentioned which gives further meaning to his actions later in the thread.
And the second npc which comes in later seemed to hint at more, even though he was only briefly involved.
The pc I think also well rped their lack of knowledge/skill in working with the Ashta, which is often a tricky thing to rp. How much do you know, how much do you not know? What things that you know already can be tied in to this thing you don't know? I saw all of those things tied into and throughout this thread which made it that much more believable.
It all seemed to mix together into a believable and interesting tale with real learning, some subtle use of gnosis, and possible friendships/future threads to come.
I always love reading 'day in the life' type threads, and it was fun to see Ines use her gnosis with the ashta while she tried to adjust to things.
