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Considered one of the most mysterious cities in Mizahar, Alvadas is called The City of Illusions. It is the home of Ionu and the notorious Inverted. This city sits on one of the main crossroads through The Region of Kalea.

[Alvadas] False Impressions

Postby Marionette on October 12th, 2014, 8:30 pm

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Construction, eh? I will have to find a place for that if you feel it is a problem. What do you mean by construction exactly? Anything specifically?

And when I proofread these locations, I may find things that need changing or revision.
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Postby Aislyn Leavold on October 12th, 2014, 8:37 pm

I'd like to request that Aislyn's Abode be added to the link map!
That's my only problem with the link map, and I think it's valid, because as far as I can tell, I asked for it to be added a while ago via PM and never found it under "Private Residences". Either that or I'm blind and it has been added, in which case I apologize profusely.

EDIT: Actually, now that I look at it, there is a few other things I'd change. One being the fact that The Alvadas Underground's text colour coding appears to be broken. I'd also like to request that the whole OOC sense of The Orney Orphanage be elaborated on, like if a PC were to adopt a child, would the child have any knowledge of the disappearances? Another thing with the orphanage- What would the adoption fares be?
That seems a bit specific, but I really liked the orphanage concept, so I read a lot into it out of curiosity.
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Postby Yisanareysin on October 12th, 2014, 8:50 pm

The Alche^2 should updated, and there are several places where Ionu is written as explicitly male.

The Colosseum should be taken off, or put in a different section, since it's been destroyed for a couple of years

I'm not sure if something should be done about the stallion's rear, since both Vic and Seven are long gone

Aside from that, nothing I can think of right now.
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Postby Marionette on October 12th, 2014, 10:04 pm

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Alrighty, I'll get to work. You guys make some good points and I can't address everything right now, but I'll be back later to talk to you guys.

Also, Aislyn, I sent that info to Mirage to edit the linkmap forever ago. It was likely the PM was lost or it slipped through the cracks. I'll resend it and see if it will be added now since I am unable to edit things directly like that.
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Postby Nanami on October 13th, 2014, 6:55 pm

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Happy Thanksgiving my gentle Canadians! Not only did we jack the American's feasting holiday and tack it on a completely different historical event, we didn't even give enough fucks to change the name. And let us celebrate this petty theft by consuming lethal amounts of pumpkin pie and turkey weeks before they get to. Then tomorrow we will be basking in gravy afterglow, thankful we are not trampling each other for xbox's and iPhone's in the sinister yearly ritual of the Black Friday.

A toast! To America's great traditions and Canada's great plagiarizing skill, and much better sense. Happy Holidays. ^(^.^)^

I'll be back from my in laws/vacation very late tonight. So everyone I owe post to can expect something within the next day or two. :nod:
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Postby Darkalin Pinewood on October 13th, 2014, 7:49 pm

Whooo! Thanksgiving!
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Postby Kuvarakh on October 13th, 2014, 8:16 pm

I feel so violated...
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ALCHEMY.....When evolution is just too slow.

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Postby Nanami on October 13th, 2014, 8:22 pm

I'm sorry Kuva, I can't hear you over all this pie I'm having without you.
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Postby Darkalin Pinewood on October 17th, 2014, 4:06 pm

Oh yeah, speaking of linkmaps, and locations, I put a location in the Dev thread. Just putting this out.
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Postby Neologism on October 20th, 2014, 8:10 pm

Hello illusionists!

Due to an unfortunate incident, Marionette's laptop is currently not functioning. She contacted us mods to let us know she will be absent for the following week or so (don't hold me to my words on this), because she can't access Mizahar at the moment (hence, I am announcing this instead of her). So just hold tight everyone, she will be back soon for you guys! :)

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